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Catherine's avatar

Loving this story!! I love hearing the Norse mythology references. It feels so familiar, but in a new way. Keep up the great work!

I found one misspelled word in this chapter:

“Just keep your eye on her as you said.”

*Ragvald* looked over his shoulder. “I agree with Trond. She is not to be trusted. I sense a darkness within her.”

Ragnvald was spelled as Ragvald. Just wanted to point that out!

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A mercenary hiding secrets and a theif besting our big boy. Nothing too surprising this time. Interesting to see a god appear briefly, though the quick look means little for now.

I'm glad there was an explanation for why they didn't have a communication device since that seems obvious for a sci-fi story. World is very viking so far with only a touch of sci-fi flavor.

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