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InspiredLewis's avatar

Curious how you're taking this into a sci-fi version of their myths. I'm also curious what kind of sci-fi we are in for. Plasma blasters and gunships so far, but how much more will we get?

Elliot Kessler's avatar

There’s plenty more for sure. Thanks for reading!

ImSoUnpopular's avatar

I’m getting so many flashbacks to the Thor movies. 😆

Interesting concept! It’ll be fun to see what happens.

Elliot Kessler's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Andrew's avatar

Should I leave feedback in this comment section? I wonder if “need” would be better as “needed” in the paragraph that introduces the giants.

Andrew's avatar

Also, wrong “your” in sentence “Doesn’t mean your not doing what’s best for them” in the paragraph after the meeting ends.

Elliot Kessler's avatar

Absolutely! I appreciate your help. Will be fixing those errors for sure!

Maire's avatar

Fascinating concept of a clan leader whose only crime has been the inconvenient times in which he is forced to rule. Looking forward to the next installment!

Elliot Kessler's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Catherine's avatar

Seeing all the old Norse names of people and places, is so exciting!! I could picture the setting and followed the conversations well in the meeting scene. It was as though my own thoughts were being voiced by each character in the room!

I’m really enjoying it so far, and I can’t wait to see how the adventure goes on.